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Post by Deleted on Jan 24, 2015 20:36:27 GMT -5
Armando Luna Shift Rain WarriorGeneral Race: Beastfolk -Shark-
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaos Good
Class: Warrior
Occupation: Fang of the BeastFolk
Personal Appearance
Armando is a young man of twenty six of the beaskfolk race. He stand at five foot seven and weight about one hundred and twenty pounds. He has neck length black hair that spike out the closer it is the the neck. His eyes are different then others as the pupil are ovals rather than round. While his skin is tan it is cover by scales that are invisible to the naked eye. Even so, if one should touch him, they would only feel slight bump but an otherwise smooth skin. Two shark fins grace his forearms, one on each. A signal shark tail can be sighted behind him.
His favor clothing that are rather casual for someone in a military. This is easily explained in one signal sentence. He loves to fight so something simple that can be replace easily is a life saver. So he prefers a selveless shirt under a zip-up jacket for his top half. Due to his tail, he adds small slits at the bottom of every shirts and jackets. On his lower half are regular working jeans and battle worn hiking boots.
Personality
To put it simple, Armando is someone who doesn't care what must be done to receive the end result. This does not mean that he heartless, rather that he is able to close his own heart for his sake and the sake of others. A favor quote of his is "a signal life can save a nation", unfortunately, he is also willing to give his own life for the same reason. Luckily, there was never a reason for him to give it.
This is what he show to public, yet to his closest friends and family, he could never be more different. In their opinion, Armando is a big softie that can't hurt a fly. The way he act in the public is just a tough man act to them. If only that they known that the way Armando act to them is the true mask. He is scare that if he acts like his true self that they would be afraid of him, something that he never wants. So he pretends to be a softie for their, and his, own sake.
What is his true face you ask? It's a deadly warrior that won't quit until he get his job done. With the title Swift Rain Warrior, he is a fast warrior that strike with deathly ease and in total silence. Granted, he never stops moving to gives his enemy a chance to notice him in the first place. As quoted from an old army buddy "Armando is more shark then credited. I somewhat feel sorry for those that cross his sword. Somewhat."
History
Armando was born to a pair of mercenary that live at the edge of Ba'dagar. His parent belonged to a small group that believe all children should be tested to see if they would survive the world. Because of this, as soon as he can walk, he was given military training to survive the test. Said test was given to him on his seventh birthday, to spend one week in the wild and survive. With only a single weapon, he and nine others went to completed the test. Not knowing it would be the most difficult thing he would ever do.
When the week was finally over, only Armando and two other had made it through. Unfortunately it left such a mark on him that left him emotionally scar, turning him into a heartless shell of his former self. Luckily he was able to slowly take back his emotion with the help of the other survivors and the new change of place. His parent decided to retire and move into the city proper where he grow up and join the military at eighteen.
For the next eight year, Armando had made a name of himself as the Swift Rain Warrior. He raise through the ranks and found himself turning more and more heartless. Yet his younger sibling and his truest friends kept him sane. Some time after his twenty sixth birthday he was called to the government building for a reassignment.
Extra OOC Name
Aj or Armando is fine
How Did You Find Us?
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Face Claim
Wadanohara-Samekichi-Armando Luna
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Post by Ryo on Jan 25, 2015 0:20:29 GMT -5
Okay so your app overall is a bit barebones and skeleton. If possible I'd like to see it expanded a little bit. I'm sure there's a way to add in more details about your character.
Other thing which I wanted to point out; the name and series of your FC are literally on the Zerochan page you have your image hotlinked to. So it is not unknown. Fix your FC entry and you should be good.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2015 3:47:31 GMT -5
Bump with an added paragraph to appearances and personality. Fix the issue with the face claim
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Post by Ryo on Jan 25, 2015 13:54:59 GMT -5
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